My past learning : write a letter

I found my old writing several years ago when I was learning to write a letter as assignment from my English teacher. I found grammar error and several wrong structure. 

Dear Sarah,

    Hello Sarah, how are you? I hope you’re well. I and my family are well here. I miss you so much…Sarah let me share my experience going to Sampoerna Academy.

    Last mid term,I got a good mark in my Business Studies exam. Woow, it’s my first experience I can get A* in Business Studies exam. My friends and I got reward. We can go to Botani Square which is located in Bogor city, not far from my school.

    We order pizza and spaghetti in Pizza Hut.I went there with my friends, they’re Firdausi,Wahyudi and Rifai.We missed so much to eat pizza and spaghetti, so we chose that menu which contains salad and tomatto sauce on the top.Is it nice right? We also bought Pepsi to accompany our meal.I was very happy because the food is delicious. Ehm….nyummy….Do you want it?He..he..

    The restaurant is supported by tidy tables and chairs,good service clean room and strategis place,in front of mall.

    I think that’s enough.I hope in my exam I can get good mark ,so I can go back there. I also hope my next holiday you can visit Bogor to accompany me in Pizza Hut there.OK, we continue next time.Please reply my letter.Bye….

Cheers

Feni

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